Second Draft
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In this part, we did a revision to the first draft and we have corrected the mistakes in draft one using the students and instructor revision. Then we added the abstract and conclusion as well as some missing ideas after doing more research.
It was not just about writing, I felt that this time it was the best in terms of communication with the group and cooperating together to do our best. Draft 2 was uploaded to moodel and 2 students made a review.
It was not just about writing, I felt that this time it was the best in terms of communication with the group and cooperating together to do our best. Draft 2 was uploaded to moodel and 2 students made a review.
